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On Monday
My eyes are black
Tired
Dreary
On Tuesday
My eyes are brown
Less dark
More light
On Wednesday
My eyes are green
Normal
Just me
On Thursday
My eyes are hazel
Thinking of you
Missing you
On Friday
My eyes are gold
Excited
Innocent
On Saturday
My eyes are blue
Carefree
Relaxed
But on Sunday
My eyes are white
Lifeless
Without you
My eyes are black
Tired
Dreary
On Tuesday
My eyes are brown
Less dark
More light
On Wednesday
My eyes are green
Normal
Just me
On Thursday
My eyes are hazel
Thinking of you
Missing you
On Friday
My eyes are gold
Excited
Innocent
On Saturday
My eyes are blue
Carefree
Relaxed
But on Sunday
My eyes are white
Lifeless
Without you
Very similar to the last one because I wrote them at the same time, but I think they are unique enough to be ok. I was going to add one more stanza, but I think it is good the way it is. What do you think?
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the last stanza was very memorable. i really liked it