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Poison Skies

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Skies light up the night with red and blue.
Tiles line the floor and table,
Spilling with liquid poison.
Pain seeps through our words and destroys us from the inside.
It slowly kills us,
But we keep going,
Going,
Going,
Because we are bored with living.
Another "experiment." Though it's not really an experiment anymore, more like another product of destruction. Short and simple, hope you enjoy!
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JulioCMiranda's avatar
This drags me excited into another world.
Your clear and vivid descriptions drove me to a grin,
especially because the last five lines all led to a wonderful 
ending sentence.

Absolutely amazing.

Length, imagination, and composition.

All very well done.